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Battle Royal by Lucy Parker
1.5
slow-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Complicated
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for this advanced eARC for an honest review. 

I didn’t like this one. 

There were too many subplots going on that I think took away from the main plot. 

Sylvie and Jack
Dominic and Pen
Jessie and Patrick 
Rosie and Johnny
The Royal cake competition 
The Operation Cake show 
Sylvie and Dominic 

This focused way too much on the baking show which brought nothing to the story. I also think a more entertaining story would have been forcing Sylvie and Dominic to design the royal cake together, forcing them in proximity, which is how they end up together. 

The writing style didn’t work for me either. There were too many references to British pop culture that I had no clue about since I’m not from England.