I'm not super into the whole daddy thing, and mostly picked this up bc I was under the impression there would be a lot more infernal bureaucracy than there ended up being. But neither of those are why the low rating. 

The pacing, story, and editing were all over the place. Some sections were really well done and felt super polished, but they were sandwiched between bits that read like a rough draft. 

Do not think I'll be reading more of the series.