Page 15, was the first point where I went oh, this was written by men. Because you you'd have to pay me a large amount of cold hard cash to sit stark naked in an exam room. Let alone undressing with the doctor in the room.
Pg 35: Lets add some Not How Cameras Work to our Men Writing Women.

This was honestly one of the most boring power fantasies that I have ever read, A more boring, more violent, more sexualized, version of Haruhi Suzimiya.
What I would have given for even the slightest bit of humor.