I'm so disappointed by this because I really wanted to love it. Over all, all my issues with it boil down to the writing and not the plot or characters. I think others will enjoy this more if their reading experience isn't as heavily based on writing.
The character development was choppy, the plot was also choppy and confusing at times, and the emphasis on this taking place in the future was FAR too heavy handed for my liking. Just like your plot do its work, let your characters live, and don't emphasize so heavily just because you're writing a teen book. Overall, this was kinda just frustrating tk read.