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The Risk by S.T. Abby
2.5
dark mysterious fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

17/02/2021
2.5 ⭐
This felt like criminal minds fanfiction just with different names. I'm not gonna lie, I skipped a few paragraphs every now and then because so much of it was either boring justifications or explanations or just the characters repeating something they said in the previous chapter. The dialogue also felt really stilted, I can't explain it exactly but it felt sort of like it was written by a robot.
Also, this is a series when it could easily just be combined to make a 300-page book?? 

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