The beginning was a bit rough for me. I had to really push through it. The amount of obliviousness was insane, and not like awww that's so cute what an oblivious himbo, no it was like the dude, how can you be so oblivious!!

Once it moved on, things began to smooth out for me a bit. Nick was so grumpy and aloof compared to Hayden's obliviousness and sweetness. 

Overall it was a ok read.