Free short fluff 2013
For a short story, this was an ok read. It is a predictable romance happily ever after ending. I liked the characters but they're a bit forgettable. They remind me too much of all the other contemporary romance characters. And there was more telling in this story then needed. I think Lisa could've stuck with Lisa's point of view and done without Justin's point of view. By doing so she could create more show on the character's feelings. And there would be more room to describe the couples kissing and sex scenes. This was more rated G in that area as we're just told in one sentence about how affectionate the couple is, let alone their sex life. Still, this was an ok very quick read for a short story