Child of Destiny is an amazing first novel and wonderfully written and descriptive.

The plot, characters and world building are amazing and well thought out, creating a real atmosphere and tension for the reader. The fight/battle scenes are incredibly well done and immersive and show true understanding of the military process whether through personal interest or research.
The magic system is also interesting as the concept of it causing physical pain was inventive.

My personal issue was with the pace of the novel, as for me it took a while to get into the action, hence my removing a star. Along with minor editing issues that are understandable among self publishers.

All in all, a great fantasy debut filled with complex characters, an expansive world and ominous antagonists.