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Maybe One Day by Melissa Kantor
2.0

2.5 stars.

Started off okay, but then it started dragging and becoming cheesy and cliche. A bit melodramatic; though it fits, it doesn't work for me as a reader. Sure, it's sad and all, but yeah, it was an excuse. Also - that was a terrible choice in the last scene.