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I Still Remember by Priya Prithviraj
3.0

The author of this title reached out to me asking if I would take the time to review her short story "I Still Remember". Priya, if you are reading this, I am sorry it took me so long to get around to reading, reviewing, and sharing your work. This piece of literature is beautifully written and it is obvious that the author is a very talented writer. I enjoyed the setting and storyline she created immensely and could relate to the topic of "losing your first love". So why the three-star rating? Well, to be completely honest, I wish this story had been longer. I didn't get to spend as much time with Ji-woo, the main character, as I wanted to, and think that this piece would have had a much bigger impact if it had just had more substance to it. I would definitely consider reading more of this author's work in the future and believe that with some guidance, she will be able to expand upon her talents and write a piece even better than this one.