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Heal Me by Scarlet Blackwell
3.5
dark medium-paced
Strong character development: Complicated
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

Painfully drawn out bi-awakening, with internalised and externalised homophobia.  The "oh, actually we love each other" inciting event was over-powered for the story, and too quickly shrugged off in places. (see content warnings)

The writing overall is pretty solid, so I think this really just needed a stern beta-reader to make it great.

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