Simple, but almost too simple.  Overall I like the story, but I don't need the big long dedication in the front.  The dedication should not be longer than the book.  Plus all the back matter.  It was over kill.  Then let's talk about the illustrations.  They look self-published, but they are not bad.  However, what is with the various bubbles on each page.  Sometimes they represent the sun and the moon, but why are things in “bubble”?  It’s just odd.  This book will be nice for those that need it, but overall, not something I would rush to put in my library.