An easy read, although it kind of dragged in the middle and then suddenly ramped up at the end. I did like the characters. I love multiple pov but  the switching between Charlotte and Elijah kept replaying the same scene but from each pov, which I found a bit annoying to be honest and made it feel a bit tell rather than show. 
Think it could do with some better editing. But it was enjoyable enough, may read the next one!