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Fighting Destiny by Amelia Hutchins
2.0

Convoluted and weak

The female mc is annoying, unlikeable and completely unrelatable. The male mc while marginally better is still a bit of a one trick pony with no real bedroom finesse to speak of and the plot - or lack there of - is weak.
Overall its not written very well with inconsistencies in scenes and the worldbuilding is shoddy. Fae having to feed through sex element wasnt thought through and so its basically 447 kindle pages of rape threats and abusive males.
The smut was fine enough but just too crass for me with no emotion behind their couplings and just lust