A two star rating is incredibly generous. Even after ignoring the countless grammatical errors in just 300 pages I still disliked most of this. I absolutely hated the Adam and every other character was just so...forced. Even while writing this I am still contemplating dropping it down to 1 star.It's a shame, a far better writer could have written a much better story from this concept. Oh well, at least I know which author to avoid in the future.