I agree with a lot of the reviews out there that this story was choppy. It would get into the story and then suddenly the chapter would bring up something from Bug's past, spending a good chapter on it, too. Also, Bug was not a character I could get along with. Yeah, girl power and everything, but she took offense to everything and everyone, and that made her a very unlikeable character. She was down on her luck a lot, but it was her anger and pride and poor character that kept her in that state. Sorry Soul Enchilada, you had great storyline potential, but the character and writing style brought you down.