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Meeting Millie by Clare Ashton
4.25

I really enjoyed Meeting Millie. Charlotte, with her ADHD traits, reminded me a lot of myself, and I adored brash Millie and her unapologetic self. The side characters were also great, and I’m looking forward to reading the next book and getting into the head of Olivia, Charlotte’s best friend.

There are a number of issues with punctuation, such as missing end quotes and periods, that I found really distracting. The chapter changes weren’t very clear, either, with the titles left justified and in the same font as the rest of the book. I know that’s mostly an editing thing and I’m hoping this is cleaned up in the next book, because the writing itself is quite nice.