Lovely art, but the story is really lacking. I understand that for an independent artist it may be hard to construct a first comic, but this story was quite lack luster. I didn't know who anyone was, I didn't know their motives, and I didn't feel connected to them. The lettering was just typed font overlaid against the artwork. This is so unfortunate because I love the premise and adore de Leon's art; I just wish she had collaborated with someone on this piece to make it a more cohesive comic.