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The Mersey Sound by Roger McGough, Adrian Henri, Brian Patten
2.0
funny lighthearted fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: N/A
Strong character development: N/A
Loveable characters: N/A
Diverse cast of characters: N/A
Flaws of characters a main focus: N/A

I've given comments on each of the individual poets and my favourite poems of theirs (in this collection) below. Overall, I must admit that this classic anthology didn't capture my interest at all, despite having personal connections to Liverpool. Upon research I discovered that the Liverpool Poets' aim was to make poetry more culturally accessible and relevant. In that respect I think they were successful. The poetry is unpretentious and undeniably more relatable to the average 60's Scouser. But therein lies its problem too. Whereas some poetry, no matter when it's written, can feel timeless, all three of these poets feel very much of their time. The free wheeling verses and references are undeniably and specifically of the 60s and feel dated. Themes of sexual freedom (plus outdated language implying homophobia, sexism and racism), superheros, Pop culture e.g. The Beatles, youth, urbanness, and even Woolworths (I'm only 28 and Woolies closed down in my childhood). Reading in 2022, it felt like a very superficial painting of that era and even made Liverpool feel two dimensional which I was disappointed with.

Adrian Henri
Um, he mentions young girls and school girls an awful lot. It was jarring, in a bad way. (Not the creepiest example by far, but the clearest example of this theme/fixation on youth and young girls is in 'Mrs Albion you've got a lovely daughter' I'm imagining inspired by William Blake's 'Visions of the Daughters of Albion'. I just get creepy vibes from him and it took me right out of the poem. I only appreciated the urban references, e.g. 'plastic daffodils', vs 'lily of the valley'. I don't understand what makes him so celebrated tbh. 'Favorites', or least bad poems are:

- Love Poem/Colour Supplement
- Country song
- The blazing hat, Part II
- Pictures from an exhibition
- Where'er you walk
- The new 'Our Times'

Roger McGough
He uses the word woman instead of girl, thank God. Big focus of sex, but in a better, tiny more grown up, way than Henri. Uses surrealism more cleverly imo. 'Favourites':

- come close and sleep now
- the fallen birdman
- at lunchtime a story of love
- why patriots are a bit nuts in the head
- sad aunt madge
- goodbat nightman (actually liked this one)
- what you are
- vinegar
- M.66
- dreampoem
- mother the wardrobe is full of infantry men


Brian patten
His work is notably darker than the other two. Still had sex in it. Not quite as surrealist, focused on real experiences. He's also the only one who clearly attempted to tackle some political issues (White Smethwick). 

- party piece
- a green sportscar 
- after breakfast 
- seascape
- somewhere between heaven and woolworths, a song
- I'm dreaming of a white Smethwick 
- maud, 1965
- room
- schoolboy - quotable bits
- delicate John 
- a talk with a wood
- in a new kind of dawn
- the beast