Love the premise and I definitely look forward to more. The 'what if' of the future depicts an easily manipulated populace, a corrupt government bought out by corporations, and an insatiable selfishness of those in power. Needless to say, it feels like a very real future so the text is poignant and powerful. While it is a great storyline, it felt very scatterbrained. Perhaps it's meant to reflect on the short attention span of the future it depicts?