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2.0

I have so much to say about this book for one I did not really like it the story was very generic and predictable with a few parts that could of made the story better they just made it all the more boring with no depth whatsoever. Now on to the characters they were mostly one dimensional starting with Crystal a selfish moron who most of her actions were a instant eye roll and her attitude could barely stand her though sometimes she was not too bad. Moving on to Becca the type of girl who does not think she is pretty and is you stereo typical bookworm. On to the asshole called Farrel he was the worst male lead I have read read about really creepy and smarmy he was just a thug could not stand him at all. Lastly on to Maddox he was actually the one I liked best he had more dimension than the other characters and the things he did made so much more sense the only likable character of the bunch. To the romance it was all insta love which I just can not stand I like romance with some form of development which this had none. The plot was for one boring completely predictable with really bad world building the story starts with Becca falling into a coma after touching a book going to another world meeting Maddox and moves on to Crystal finding out about a secret society after awhile meeting a total douche getting caught and escaping nothing interesting there. So overall I did not really like this book and will not be continuing the series.