Comprehensive and very well formatted. I found it easy to follow and there are action items attached to the problems diagnosed from the personal to systemic level. I don’t know what more you could ask for.

If I had to dig for something Sometimes it’s a bit wooden when it gets into stats, but without that empirical data listed where it is, such as if it were moved to an appendix or something, I think it would lose some of the weight and the formatting would suffer. The numbers are pretty pivotal, so.