The editing was significantly better, less clunky, and the story was stronger! Now it’s not as great as other books that are similar but it’s still okay. The magic and the world is cute and fun. B.B Altson has a creative mind 

I loved seeing Jayden excelling, that boy certainly has my heart. Elsie is doing big things! And of course Amari growing more confident! 

However, I don’t think this particular book and take on a magical world is for me. And that’s okay. 

Con: I wanted to stop reading, I wanted to skip ahead because it was no longer grabbing my attention. The title of the book was only about 5% of the book, I expected it to be what the book was mostly about