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When the Moon Hatched by Sarah A. Parker
DID NOT FINISH: 27%

The main character isn’t strong, she’s just angry. The slight word changes (grandma to grandmah for example) was unnecessary, and the glossary didn’t have to cover all of that for 30 pages before getting to the actual story. I also feel like every new chapter started with “I” and the grammatical errors should have been caught. It was very hard to digest with the way everything was phrased. I read and loved the Priory of the Orange Tree series, so I’m not unfamiliar with high fantasy worlds and how they’re built, but this books high fantasy world felt forced and wasn’t described in a digestible way.