To me this whole story made no sense to me apart from just a few parts. Half the story i had no idea what was going on, her romantic feelings were with almost every male she met for some reason which made me very irritated. The plot to me is still not clear and the only reason i kept reading is because of my liking for Whalen and rooting for Whalen.

Coming to that character, it seems to me the writer is trying to write enemies to lovers, i can see the outlining of it, but its not pierced together in the nice way, its jumping from one thing to another. 

The world building feels very flat, there is a little village, there is a barn and a house and thats all we know there is. I would have loved to know more about this clan village and the people in it! 

I do have some good notes though which made me read on. Some description of things made it come a little more alive of the flat feeling story. It felt to me like the writer was like, oh i need more feeling. Then puts all that feeling in that small thing and then the rest is flat again. If more time spend on those feelings im sure it would have felt way less flat to me!