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These Witches Don't Burn by Isabel Sterling
3.0

Honestly all I knew going into this book was "sapphic witches," but that was enough to get my hopes up. (I should've known better.)

The main strength of this book is LGBTQIA+ rep; I thought the worldbuilding was fine but not particularly memorable, and I really didn't like the main characters much. It felt like there was too much drama just for the sake of drama — a lot of it romance-adjacent, though there were also some nObOdY uNdErStAnDs My AnGsT mini-monologues (believable teenager thoughts but exasperating to read over and over). And I felt like we never got enough information to make our own judgment about Hannah and Veronica's breakup:
Spoilerbits and pieces are gradually rehashed in arguments, but never in a cohesive enough picture that I felt Hannah was totally justified in blaming Veronica for everything that happened
.

I guessed one of the two major plot twists because it was incredibly predictable and
Spoilerof course the main suspect never turns out to be the culprit; it's like they've never seen a TV show
; I think it would've been less frustrating if
SpoilerHannah had ever seriously considered anyone besides Nolan could be the Witch Hunter, or that Nolan could've done some but not all of it, or any of a million other possibilities
. The other reveal
Spoilerie, Morgan and her parents being Blood Witches but not evil
had more potential, but considering all the buildup I felt like the other characters accepted it too easily.

So all in all, for me this was another case of intriguing premise, mediocre execution. I noticed all the sequel hooks, but frankly I have no real interest in continuing the series.

content warnings:
Spoilerblood, animal sacrifice, arson, major character death, on-page car accident, bi erasure (immediately challenged in-text)

rep:
Spoilerlesbian MC, bisexual love interest, major & minor & past F/F relationships, WLW major character, MLM trans (FTM) major character, WLW minor character

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CONVERSION: 7.73 / 15 = 3 stars

Prose: 5 / 10
Characters & Relationships: 4 / 10
Emotional Impact: 4 / 10
Development / Flow: 6 / 10
Setting: 8 / 10

Diversity & Social Themes: 3 / 5
Intellectual Engagement: N/A
Originality / Trope Execution: 2 / 5
Rereadability: N/A
Memorability: 2 / 5