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Only When It's Us by Chloe Liese
2.0

Unfortunately this one wasn't for me, for a number of reasons.

1. Too much telling and no showing, a fact that wasn't helped because our main couple narrated the story in first person POV
2. If you have to keep calling two people "frenemies" then maybe you aren't actually writing them in a way that gives off that vibe
3. Plot wise some stuff were given next to no attention, while other more inconsequential were talked about again and again
4. The two POVs became overly repetitive after one point

And there's so much more to touch on, especially with Ryder's hearing loss and eventual decision to get cochlear implants, but I feel I'm not adequately equipped to talk about.