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sorkatani 's review for:
The Haunting of Cabin Green
by April A. Taylor
What you get when your pretentiousness isn't founded in talent.
Okay, maybe that's a little harsh, but, honestly, someone take away the author's thesaurus and sit them down and explain to them why not every. single. thing. needs to be presented as a simile. I am begging you!
The protagonist behaves unrealistically, and the plot is basically 1408 only, unlike Cusack's character, Ben has absolutely NO REASON to stay.
The jumping between times was a nice way to break up the story, but since the story struggled to build an atmosphere, the switching killed any that might have started to develop.
Okay, maybe that's a little harsh, but, honestly, someone take away the author's thesaurus and sit them down and explain to them why not every. single. thing. needs to be presented as a simile. I am begging you!
The protagonist behaves unrealistically, and the plot is basically 1408 only, unlike Cusack's character, Ben has absolutely NO REASON to stay.
The jumping between times was a nice way to break up the story, but since the story struggled to build an atmosphere, the switching killed any that might have started to develop.