I'm really trusting everyone who says this gets better soon. I can see the elements that make this work, but so much of it frustrates me.

Harry, please stop talking about the breasts of every single woman you ever meet. I notice women's breasts too. I can't help it, I just do. I'm sure everyone does. But I don't wax fucking poetic about raised nipples when I do.

And how about that fridging, folks!

:|

I don't mean to be so negative about this book. There were a few things I really liked - Michael, especially. And like I said, I can see the elements in place that I enjoy in my urban fantasy. Hopefully there's much more of the good stuff and less of the Man Boy Fantasy in the future.