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The Influence by Bentley Little
3.0

Interesting premise and a lot of stomach churning horror scenes, but I kinda wish Stephen King wrote it, so we get longer story with developed characters. Most of the time I had no idea who are the people mentioned so I didn't care what's happening to them. It bother me we never got the explanation what was the creature, and why all that was happening happened, the ending was too rushed. Also, red herrings were so badly written, it annoyed me. I liked Jill was under the influence, that resolution was a great choice. Also, what's with the author's obsession with buttholes?? The narrator was great, I liked his intonation.