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Twice-Spent Comet by Ziggy Schutz
3.0
hopeful medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven: Character
Strong character development: Complicated
Loveable characters: Yes
Diverse cast of characters: Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus: Complicated

I'm late on this one as it got lost in the holiday shuffle.

This novella was very sweet. Cosmic mermaids? Yes please! I think I would've liked more information about how they came to be, but it's sufficiently mysterious. I thought the idea of magic being simple things like a trail of interconnected coincidences was sweet. Some things I didn't understand, like how Benat and Jones were lovers, but then he/she was also Fer's found family sibling with no mention of Benat. Or how these timelines intersected or did not intersect or how Jones even escaped prison time considering he/she was holding onto Fer before arrest. But that's just me thinking too hard.