paddlefoot55 's review for:

Trust by L. Chapman
3.0

3.5 stars - ARC received for honest review.

The premise of this story and the actual story were quite good, but the writing left a little to be desired.

It jumped from character, and the lack of abbreviation started to drive me a little nuts - everyone sounded so very formal, and at times like they were talking to strangers, not a couple falling in love.

The lack of abbreviation and all the I Wills instead of I'll might not worry other readers, but it did start to grind on me.

L Chapman shows promise, just needs a little more work with beta readers and editors to work out the kinks.

Not saying don't read it, it may just be me that these things irritate!

3.5 stars