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Trust
by L. Chapman
3.5 stars - ARC received for honest review.
The premise of this story and the actual story were quite good, but the writing left a little to be desired.
It jumped from character, and the lack of abbreviation started to drive me a little nuts - everyone sounded so very formal, and at times like they were talking to strangers, not a couple falling in love.
The lack of abbreviation and all the I Wills instead of I'll might not worry other readers, but it did start to grind on me.
L Chapman shows promise, just needs a little more work with beta readers and editors to work out the kinks.
Not saying don't read it, it may just be me that these things irritate!
3.5 stars
The premise of this story and the actual story were quite good, but the writing left a little to be desired.
It jumped from character, and the lack of abbreviation started to drive me a little nuts - everyone sounded so very formal, and at times like they were talking to strangers, not a couple falling in love.
The lack of abbreviation and all the I Wills instead of I'll might not worry other readers, but it did start to grind on me.
L Chapman shows promise, just needs a little more work with beta readers and editors to work out the kinks.
Not saying don't read it, it may just be me that these things irritate!
3.5 stars