Overall I did enjoy reading this book. It kept me interested enough to finish. That being said there are some big issues for me. One. The characters don't have much depth and I found myself really not caring much what happened to them. Two. Switching the point of view provided opportunity to show more of the story line, but the way in which it was done was extremely confusing. I found myself having to reread sections a few times to understand who's point of view I was reading. Third. It could have used another once over for grammar, spelling, etc. As I said, overall I did enjoy the story. Unfortunately for me it just felt unfinished and unpolished.