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Faith & Sin by L. Patrice
2.5

This is one of the longest short stories/novellas I've ever read. That's not a complaint in any way. I'm simply acknowledging that in comparison to the others in this series this specific story felt like it took FOREVER to read. 

Sin & Faith had crushes in high school. We get a few chapters of them in high school and background on where their minds were and the "missed opportunity". Then we get some chapters in the present. We find out what's going on in their lives and we see them both talking about their feelings about attending the high school reunion. THEN we get some chapters of them at said reunion. THEN finally in the LAST 6 pages of the book they hook up. 

I don't think the words dick, pussy, or wet were used. I'm not saying I need those words but reading a sex scene that doesn't utilize what I would consider key words was a bit rough. Not even a cock, penis, or vagina. Pretty sure he inserted himself into her sex and then they completed the act twice. 

It was everything they both had been waiting for...... And then life goes on.