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shannonreese 's review for:
Stolen by the Orc Commander
by K.L. Wyatt
This review is not meant to be mean in any away because i truly feel like this story has a lot of potential, but was just rushed. There were also inconsistencies - for example, Azogg and Snow spoke to each other fine the first time they meet, and then they say eachothers names caveman style (touching their chest saying just their name).
I hope the author tries again at this book and has more editors to help because like I said it has potential, it was almost along the lines of a Ice Planet Barbarian story, it just needs some TLC.
I hope the author tries again at this book and has more editors to help because like I said it has potential, it was almost along the lines of a Ice Planet Barbarian story, it just needs some TLC.