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1.0

This review is not meant to be mean in any away because i truly feel like this story has a lot of potential, but was just rushed. There were also inconsistencies - for example, Azogg and Snow spoke to each other fine the first time they meet, and then they say eachothers names caveman style (touching their chest saying just their name).

I hope the author tries again at this book and has more editors to help because like I said it has potential, it was almost along the lines of a Ice Planet Barbarian story, it just needs some TLC.