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Immortal Longings by Chloe Gong
3.0
adventurous tense

YA with aged up protagonists. Which is to say that the concept was interesting but motivations and magnitude felt flat and disappointing. There was frequently a lot of description that felt unnecessary or insignificant to the plot. It wasn't bad, but I wanted more from it. Not more story, though. How is this supposed to be a trilogy?!

Green Bone Saga (Fonda) and War Arts (Chu) are both better picks in this arena.