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Poles Apart by Kirsty Moseley
3.0

This book should've been right up my alley. I LOVE MotoGP, so, this book should've been a favourite of mine. It wasn't.
First off, you RIDE a motorbike, you don't drive it. And people who do that for a living are called RIDERS, not drivers.
Second, 4 weeks without sex isn't a long time. The fact Emma was going on about it like it was the end of the world was comical.
Third, the word 'because' does not need to be used as much as it was. Cut it out and start a new sentence.
Fourth, the fact Emma called Carson 'baby' when they weren't even a thing weirded me out. Why did she do That?
Fifth, and this is the biggie, this book was crying out for Carson's pov. So much could've been added to the story if this had happened. Every time I ended a chapter I hoped I'd see his name at the top of the page.
Sixth, I would've loved to have seen more development after the newspaper saga. It was all rather quick.
So, in all, a let down.