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Good-Looking Ugly by Rob D Smith
3.25
adventurous dark fast-paced
Plot or Character Driven: A mix
Strong character development: No
Loveable characters: No
Diverse cast of characters: No
Flaws of characters a main focus: Yes

This book needs an editor. The errors took me out of the story regularly. The author refers to one of the characters as "his cousin" (even when the "his" isn't involved) so many times it becomes laughable.

But the story isn't horrible. There is one major flaw in the plot that made me want to quit reading but sticking it out was probably the right choice. I wouldn't say there is anything here that stood out to me as exceptional but it is solid.