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Chlorine by Jade Song
3.5

A very interesting story but some parts didn't make sense to me. First, why did literally nobody keep that swim coach in check??!! Bro was literally a stereotypical man coach villain and nobody either notices or does anything about his obviously abusive behaviors the ENTIRE book. I also didn't really understand the timeline of Ren and Cathy's relationship, at times it seems like Ren hates Cathy and other times relies on her completely. Parts of the inner monologue got repetitive. It did really remind me of The Pisces but I honestly liked it better for the horror/sapphic elements :3 I would recommend, I just didn't LOVE it