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The Son of Monte-Cristo by Jules Lermina
DID NOT FINISH

DNF @ chapter 21
This is the sort of poorly done fanfiction I would expect from a preteen who hasn't got a grasp of proper writing yet, where everything in incosistent and the characters are so much out of character they're not even in the same universe, and the prose is bland and perfunctory. This doesn't deserve the honour of being called a sequel, nor to be assossiated with Dumas in any way. Guh. Bring out the brain bleach.