The dialogue was poorly written, I did not understand the characters’ attraction to one another at all, the flirting was painful, and also the book was full of typos and grammatical mistakes.

Both main characters complain about how much they hate women, there’s a long passage that continually uses the term “females”, and there’s a discussion about how gross body hair on women is, and how at minimum women should shave their armpits and legs. This all gives the book a distinctly and uncomfortably sexist vibe, and makes it unpleasant to read.