Before I get into the negatives I want to mention how much I love the representation in this book. POC and LGBTQ abound in this book and I was so happy to see fantasy being de-whitified. However, this book was long. Probably longer than it needed to be with a rather abrupt ending. Many if not all of the questions I had about loose ends were answered and I generally enjoyed the ride through this book but still feel it could have been 50-100 pages (at least) shorter.