This book was... Well, awful.

It didn't have to be. It was an interesting AU concept, but it's poorly written and barely edited. The story has potential. I love AU fanfic, which is basically what this is, (Hell, it's how Twilight started!), but it is executed (heh, Mary Elizabeth reference) so poorly.

I'm curious to see where the series goes and if it gets better, so I'll probably keep reading them as they come out, but I don't see much improvement.