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Smooth Moves by Marie Harte
2.0

Cash Griffin, ex-Marine, may be part owner of Vets on the Move, but all he wants is to be one of the team. Cash wants to keep his head down and work, trying to figure out his place in life now that his military career is over, now that his mother is dead, now that his little brother and roommate has found love. Even if one of his team, Jordan Fleming, ex-Army MP both gets on his nerves and thrills his blood. But trouble keeps seeming to find Cash.

Jordan too can't help but be attracted to the giant, grumpy man but she also has her own problems, namely her little brother who is headed down the wrong path and is on the verge of being sent away to military school. But, maybe with Cash's help she can set him straight.

But as these two work together, they find they may be perfect for each other.

Unfortunately for me there was just way to much going on in this romance, distracting from the actual romance itself. Between the dead mother drama, who's my dad, the gang violence, drug selling, etc. etc. I really just wanted to hone in on Cash and Jordan.

I received a free copy in exchange for a fair review.