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Corporations are in charge of the government, put old people in concentration camps and legitimize disowning imperfect children. This turns out to not be a perfect society.

I got the distinct impression while reading this that it wouldn't have been published if the writer wasn't in the publishing industry. The plots were contrived. The mind hopping PoV was awkward. The characters were flat. The ideas were interesting (if not original) when info-dumped for the first time, but their execution was lacking and that obvious lack was whitewashed by rehashed info-dumps.