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Vampires of El Norte by Isabel Cañas
3.75

No matter how hard or far he rode, she clung to his skin like the smell of sleep. His soul bore her brand, the wound deep and blackened and scarred over.

Reading this book was like watching a movie - every scene was perfectly described and I really felt enveloped in the atmosphere for the story. 

I loved the characters and the setting, but some aspects fell flat. For such short a book, there was so much repetition. (He’s a stranger to her now, she said vaqueros shouldn’t speak to her and slammed a door in his face.) Those repetitive lines and thought patterns of the main characters made for a very angsty romance, which can work, but here I felt like the ink would have been better used to flesh out more of the other plot lines. 

Nena’s refusal to stand up to her parents would have made more sense if we saw more of her father’s abuse, instead of mostly hearing about how he’s disliked and feared.
While the vampires were perfectly creepy, their connection to the Yanquis seemed rushed. Maybe I need to sit with the story more, but their connection to the invasion would have been more powerful if they were an Anglo ally instead of somehow being captured and forced to fight the locals (but really, how were they captured???) Nena recognizing them as just another animal in the wilderness felt like too risky a gamble when we’ve mostly seen them attacking with unknown stealth and strength. When she was a girl and the vampires at her house before the battle weren’t starving, they still threatened her and her loved ones more than any coyote or dangerous creature in the chaparral could, so why allow that in your land?