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Penalty by Jacob Chance
3.0

3.5 stars.
I voluntarily received an advanced review copy of this book and chose to review it.

I liked the premise of this book, and the main characters, Harlow and Brady were great, but I felt like the writing style was a little too stilted for my liking. I felt like the story unfolded too stiffly and didn't flow as well as I'd like. There was also the matter of Cindy. I felt like she was hidden away when she could've been such a massive part of this book and a great source of tension. Her confession at the end of the book was thrown away, I felt. But he characters were great and this was a decent read, just not one of my favourites.