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natreviews 's review for:
The Forest at the Heart of Her Mage
by Hiyodori
adventurous
challenging
dark
medium-paced
Plot or Character Driven:
Character
Strong character development:
Yes
Loveable characters:
Yes
Diverse cast of characters:
Yes
Flaws of characters a main focus:
Yes
I enjoyed this story. I will say it falls more into the young adult writing of new adult, which as times can be annoying. I think there's too much exposition dialogue, too much exposition in general about things that are brought up once and never again, and there's weird time jumping. For example, and event happens, then its a day after the event, then its hours after the event. I hope that was a placement error that never got caught and not intentional.
Nevertheless, I did enjoy the read. Could be improved in some areas, but the core story and ideas are excellent.
Nevertheless, I did enjoy the read. Could be improved in some areas, but the core story and ideas are excellent.