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DNF at page 116. I tried to like this. I did, but it is awful. The writing feels jumbled. I’m going to admit here that I have bipolar disorder and one of my manic symptoms is racing thoughts. The way the character talked and how it was written felt manic to me. It hurt my head.
Also, I really hated April. She was under-developed and super annoying.
Thirdly, I felt like the plot was lacking. There was something missing and I can’t put my finger on it.