The world is neat, but it just does seem to start happening (am I supposed to know what an autoduck is? A Nimkilim?) 

 

there is so much unneeded conflict/Miscommunication, major conflict over things I would have never thought anyone could be mad about 

 

The chemistry was good once it got going. &every other aspect of the book was better than the love story.Mystery with the competitor, the New Gods, freaking zombies! But I can’t get past some issues.